Thursday, August 19, 2010

Brush - Theme Thursday

She pulled the pins, shook her head, and felt the silky strands cascade over her shoulders. In the sunlight, her hair looked like liquid gold flowing down her back. He reached around her for the brush and proceeded to pull it through ever so gently. Working from the ends up to her head, he ensured there were no knots to create a distracting pain. Once there, he proceeded to brush her hair from crown to tip.

She loved the tender scrape of the bristles on her scalp, the tickling of his fingers as he picked up a new section to start on. He brushed her hair every night like this, he liked to pamper her, he loved to feel her hair, loved to see the look of pleasure on her face while he worked.

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  1. That sounds soooo relaxing!!! Loved this little bit of a story. :)

  2. perhaps i need to pamper my wife tonight...smiles. nice tt!

  3. hmmmmmm... that sounds so nice... I may ask my hubby to do that tonight ;)

  4. Amy...HOW ROMANTIC...I can envision this pampering!

  5. Hmmm...think he could head over to my house next? That sounds REALLY nice...!

    Enjoyed your TT, and thanks so much for your nice comments on mine. :)

  6. I can't recall ever brushing a lover's hair, but I have some nice memories of washing someone's hair. That's not a wisecrack. It was a very nice evening. Thanks for bringing it back, even if inadvertently. ;-)

    My TT post is here.

  7. Such a well crafted slice. Nice hit. -J


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